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{March 26, 2008}   Ankhein

sab kahte hain,

bahot chup rahte ho tum

kabhi kuchh kahte hi nahi!

par vo nahi jante

kitne vachal ho tum,

kitna kuchh kah jate ho

lekin koi sun hi nahi pata

ankahe shabd,

utar ate hain tumhari ankhon me

ek bhasha ban kar

aur jab apni inhi ankhon se bolte ho tum

sunti hun main mantramugdh si

lagta hai tum tum nahi,manu ho

aur main tumhari shraddha

ek divya purush ho tum

aur main tumhari sadhika.

prabhamandal alokit ho utha hai

tumhare charo taraf

jo dheere dheere mujhe bhi

khud me samet raha hai

maine dekha hai inhi ankhon me

dher sara vishwas,

jo mujhe shakti deta hai,

asimit sneh,

mera sambal hai jo.

kamp uthti hun main ye soch kar

kya hota agar

ye ankhein nahi hoti!!!!!!



Hi dear, welcome to blog world :)

Hmmm…beautiful poem! Ankhein to bin juban ke bahut kuch bol jati hai….jo samjhe wo samjhdar aur jo na samjhe wo nasamajh :)

wid luv.



just me says:

yun to bahot kuchh kahti hain
aksar magar chup rahti hain
jab mud ke dekhein ye yun hi
kitni sargoshiyan ye sahti hain

yun muskurayein to bhi ye
chhalkati kitni sadgi
jab uth ke jhuke,jhuk ke uthe
de jati phir nayi zindagi

yun samne to kahne pe
dheere se mujhko dant den
par aaj muhko bhi jara
kahna hai jo kah lene do

kal jo jhukaye sar jara
khoi si apni kitab me
kona kalam ka tham kar
baithi thi tum gum si bhala
yun khoye khoye hi jara
ek lat lapeti ungli pe
bikhre hue se balon ko
kano pe ja thahra diya
lagta tha mano ek pratima
yun hi kuchh vachal si hai
yun to sare jawab janti hai
par khud me hi sawal si hai

kuchh na kaha maine magar
sar ko jhukana hi pada
teri sadgi anmol hai
ye kahne ana hi pada



Bhav says:

Visarpi
Naam to achha choose kia hai

nice poem
kind of draws pic in mind :)



Nice poem.seems you write in all styles.but this is the first time i am seeing you writing in free style.



Jitender Singh says:

kamp uthti hun main ye soch kar
kya hota agar
ye ankhein nahi hoti!!!!!!

gr8 …dear …hope to see more of your original creations

aaankhen bhi hoti hain dil ki zubaaan…..

regds

Jitender Singh



hmmmm…achhi rachana hai…dil ke aar paar ho gayi, dil blast ho chuka hai….i hope, is type ki rachnayein nahi likhengi aap. :)
waise ye rachana hai kaun? :D



vish says:

aise tu bahut sahi likha hai…. but fir bhi… ye padho

Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Bin Bole Kardeti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Bin Bole Kardeti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan

Khamoshi Bhi To Pyaar Mein
Rakhti Bahut Yeh Asar Hai
Kab Ishq Hojaye Yaha Dil Ko Kahan Yeh Khabar Hai
Do Din Bhi Yeh Silsile Chup Sake Hai Kahan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan

Hume Neend Aye Na Jab Aankhon Mein
Badhne Lage Bekarari
Shabnam Ko Bhi Chune Se Jab
Mehsoos Ho Chingari
To Aisa Kyon Lagta Hai
Ek Hai Zameen Aasmaan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan

Bin Bole Kar deti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan
Bin Bole Kar deti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan

ab bol…. kaisa laga….



Abhishek Jain says:

main toh kamp utha hun
yeh soch kar kya hota,
agar itne acche rachnakar nahi hote….

it’s wonderful..



A Lovely poem indeed !



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