Comments on: Ankhein http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/ just a life i live,believe me it says a lot. Tue, 26 Aug 2008 09:23:41 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Prem Piyush http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-10 Prem Piyush Mon, 31 Mar 2008 15:50:18 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-10 A Lovely poem indeed ! A Lovely poem indeed !

]]> By: Abhishek Jain http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-9 Abhishek Jain Sat, 29 Mar 2008 15:23:16 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-9 main toh kamp utha hun yeh soch kar kya hota, agar itne acche rachnakar nahi hote.... it's wonderful.. main toh kamp utha hun
yeh soch kar kya hota,
agar itne acche rachnakar nahi hote….

it’s wonderful..

]]> By: vish http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-8 vish Sat, 29 Mar 2008 15:21:29 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-8 aise tu bahut sahi likha hai.... but fir bhi... ye padho Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan Bin Bole Kardeti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan Bin Bole Kardeti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan Khamoshi Bhi To Pyaar Mein Rakhti Bahut Yeh Asar Hai Kab Ishq Hojaye Yaha Dil Ko Kahan Yeh Khabar Hai Do Din Bhi Yeh Silsile Chup Sake Hai Kahan Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan Hume Neend Aye Na Jab Aankhon Mein Badhne Lage Bekarari Shabnam Ko Bhi Chune Se Jab Mehsoos Ho Chingari To Aisa Kyon Lagta Hai Ek Hai Zameen Aasmaan Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan Bin Bole Kar deti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan Bin Bole Kar deti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan ab bol.... kaisa laga.... aise tu bahut sahi likha hai…. but fir bhi… ye padho

Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Bin Bole Kardeti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Bin Bole Kardeti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan

Khamoshi Bhi To Pyaar Mein
Rakhti Bahut Yeh Asar Hai
Kab Ishq Hojaye Yaha Dil Ko Kahan Yeh Khabar Hai
Do Din Bhi Yeh Silsile Chup Sake Hai Kahan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan

Hume Neend Aye Na Jab Aankhon Mein
Badhne Lage Bekarari
Shabnam Ko Bhi Chune Se Jab
Mehsoos Ho Chingari
To Aisa Kyon Lagta Hai
Ek Hai Zameen Aasmaan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan
Aankhen Bhi Hoti Hai Dil Ki Zubaan

Bin Bole Kar deti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan
Bin Bole Kar deti Hai Halat Yeh Pal Mein Bayan

ab bol…. kaisa laga….

]]> By: Sumit Baranwal http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-7 Sumit Baranwal Sat, 29 Mar 2008 14:54:53 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-7 hmmmm...achhi rachana hai...dil ke aar paar ho gayi, dil blast ho chuka hai....i hope, is type ki rachnayein nahi likhengi aap. :) waise ye rachana hai kaun? :D hmmmm…achhi rachana hai…dil ke aar paar ho gayi, dil blast ho chuka hai….i hope, is type ki rachnayein nahi likhengi aap. :)
waise ye rachana hai kaun? :D

]]> By: Jitender Singh http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-6 Jitender Singh Sat, 29 Mar 2008 13:07:57 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-6 kamp uthti hun main ye soch kar kya hota agar ye ankhein nahi hoti!!!!!! gr8 ...dear ...hope to see more of your original creations aaankhen bhi hoti hain dil ki zubaaan..... regds Jitender Singh kamp uthti hun main ye soch kar
kya hota agar
ye ankhein nahi hoti!!!!!!

gr8 …dear …hope to see more of your original creations

aaankhen bhi hoti hain dil ki zubaaan…..

regds

Jitender Singh

]]> By: arun bharti http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-5 arun bharti Fri, 28 Mar 2008 16:38:19 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-5 Nice poem.seems you write in all styles.but this is the first time i am seeing you writing in free style. Nice poem.seems you write in all styles.but this is the first time i am seeing you writing in free style.

]]> By: Bhav http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-4 Bhav Wed, 26 Mar 2008 15:00:44 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-4 Visarpi Naam to achha choose kia hai nice poem kind of draws pic in mind :) Visarpi
Naam to achha choose kia hai

nice poem
kind of draws pic in mind :)

]]> By: just me http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-3 just me Wed, 26 Mar 2008 13:32:07 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-3 yun to bahot kuchh kahti hain aksar magar chup rahti hain jab mud ke dekhein ye yun hi kitni sargoshiyan ye sahti hain yun muskurayein to bhi ye chhalkati kitni sadgi jab uth ke jhuke,jhuk ke uthe de jati phir nayi zindagi yun samne to kahne pe dheere se mujhko dant den par aaj muhko bhi jara kahna hai jo kah lene do kal jo jhukaye sar jara khoi si apni kitab me kona kalam ka tham kar baithi thi tum gum si bhala yun khoye khoye hi jara ek lat lapeti ungli pe bikhre hue se balon ko kano pe ja thahra diya lagta tha mano ek pratima yun hi kuchh vachal si hai yun to sare jawab janti hai par khud me hi sawal si hai kuchh na kaha maine magar sar ko jhukana hi pada teri sadgi anmol hai ye kahne ana hi pada yun to bahot kuchh kahti hain
aksar magar chup rahti hain
jab mud ke dekhein ye yun hi
kitni sargoshiyan ye sahti hain

yun muskurayein to bhi ye
chhalkati kitni sadgi
jab uth ke jhuke,jhuk ke uthe
de jati phir nayi zindagi

yun samne to kahne pe
dheere se mujhko dant den
par aaj muhko bhi jara
kahna hai jo kah lene do

kal jo jhukaye sar jara
khoi si apni kitab me
kona kalam ka tham kar
baithi thi tum gum si bhala
yun khoye khoye hi jara
ek lat lapeti ungli pe
bikhre hue se balon ko
kano pe ja thahra diya
lagta tha mano ek pratima
yun hi kuchh vachal si hai
yun to sare jawab janti hai
par khud me hi sawal si hai

kuchh na kaha maine magar
sar ko jhukana hi pada
teri sadgi anmol hai
ye kahne ana hi pada

]]> By: Rewa Smriti http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/03/26/ankhein/#comment-2 Rewa Smriti Wed, 26 Mar 2008 12:28:57 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/?p=6#comment-2 Hi dear, welcome to blog world :) Hmmm...beautiful poem! Ankhein to bin juban ke bahut kuch bol jati hai....jo samjhe wo samjhdar aur jo na samjhe wo nasamajh :) wid luv. Hi dear, welcome to blog world :)

Hmmm…beautiful poem! Ankhein to bin juban ke bahut kuch bol jati hai….jo samjhe wo samjhdar aur jo na samjhe wo nasamajh :)

wid luv.

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