Comments on: JEEVAN MRITYU http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/ just a life i live,believe me it says a lot. Tue, 26 Aug 2008 09:23:41 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Rewa http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-18 Rewa Fri, 04 Apr 2008 01:22:56 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-18 Vaqeel sahiba, aap kijiye vaqalati, abhi aage ka stanza nahi dala hai....jab dalungi to kahoge zindagi aapki hamsafar nikli.... ;) Vaqeel sahiba, aap kijiye vaqalati, abhi aage ka stanza nahi dala hai….jab dalungi to kahoge zindagi aapki hamsafar nikli…. ;)

]]> By: shweta http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-17 shweta Thu, 03 Apr 2008 17:47:47 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-17 @Kunal thnx bro finally u spared sm wrds [:P]m honoured 2 ve u here. @sonu bhaiya poem is nthng its ur blessngs whch makes it gud. @prem sir aji bol hi dete!mar javan gud khake!!!! bt nahi ...........mujhe hi marne chale the...[:(] @arun dubara active hone ki lakh lakh badhaiyan @rewa di yun lagta hai ki hum jeevan ke aur aap mrtyu ki vakil bani hui hain[:P] par jo bhi ho.........instantaneous poet hoti ja rahi hain aap @bhav ur simple comments r really admirable boss......dnt say all ths.....nd ya...m a believer of life itself.....shayad concluding lines pe dhyan nahi gaya apka. nd thnx a lot to all for responding.......ur comments make the blog wrth wrtng in...... @Kunal
thnx bro finally u spared sm wrds [:P]m honoured 2 ve u here.

@sonu bhaiya
poem is nthng its ur blessngs whch makes it gud.

@prem sir
aji bol hi dete!mar javan gud khake!!!! bt nahi ………..mujhe hi marne chale the…[:(]

@arun
dubara active hone ki lakh lakh badhaiyan

@rewa di
yun lagta hai ki hum jeevan ke aur
aap mrtyu ki vakil bani hui hain[:P]
par jo bhi ho………instantaneous poet hoti ja rahi hain aap

@bhav
ur simple comments r really admirable boss……dnt say all ths…..nd ya…m a believer of life itself…..shayad concluding lines pe dhyan nahi gaya apka.

nd thnx a lot to all for responding…….ur comments make the blog wrth wrtng in……

]]> By: Bhav http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-16 Bhav Thu, 03 Apr 2008 16:45:14 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-16 good one and please excuse my simple comment as i m not as poetic as u or other people who commented before me... but i m a believer of life and i always feel life is very powerful too good one

and please excuse my simple comment as i m not as poetic as u or other people who commented before me…

but i m a believer of life and i always feel life is very powerful too

]]> By: Rewa Smriti http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-15 Rewa Smriti Thu, 03 Apr 2008 16:15:07 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-15 Sapno ka dhundhla kohra chhant kar hi rah dikhata hai, mrityu hans alingan karti jab jeevan yun thukrata hai. Bahut sunder poem hai. mere taraf s ekuch, abhi abhi likha hai :-) Jeevan hastaa yun hi machalta apni gati mein rahon ko roundta dhool udata chalta hi jata hai per kya kabhi zindagi mout se jeet pata hai? Sapno ka dhundhla kohra
chhant kar hi rah dikhata hai,
mrityu hans alingan karti
jab jeevan yun thukrata hai.

Bahut sunder poem hai. mere taraf s ekuch, abhi abhi likha hai :-)

Jeevan hastaa
yun hi machalta
apni gati mein
rahon ko roundta
dhool udata
chalta hi jata hai
per kya kabhi
zindagi mout se
jeet pata hai?

]]> By: Arun Bharti http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-14 Arun Bharti Wed, 02 Apr 2008 17:47:11 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-14 achhi kavita hai.. [mrityu hans alingan karti jab jeevan yun thukrata hai.] iske bare mein main kuchh kahunga.. jinhe jindagi se muhhabat ho jati hai o bahut dur tak mukam banate hain.. mout har kosis karti hai unko bulane ki par o apne liye mukkamal jahan banate hain har koi jeevan se thake udas ho ye jaruri nahi fir bhi mout apni reet nibhati hai.. unko himmat or bulandi par chabuk chalati hai.. jinme jine ki bahut hi tammanna baki hai unko bhi apne sath le jati hai.. ye mrityu ka kaisa rang hai ,main samajh nahi paya...??? mout se meri jang jari hai,jindagi mujhe bahut pyari hai.. Regards achhi kavita hai..
[mrityu hans alingan karti

jab jeevan yun thukrata hai.]

iske bare mein main kuchh kahunga..

jinhe jindagi se muhhabat ho jati hai
o bahut dur tak mukam banate hain..
mout har kosis karti hai unko bulane ki
par o apne liye mukkamal jahan banate hain

har koi jeevan se thake udas ho ye jaruri nahi
fir bhi mout apni reet nibhati hai..
unko himmat or bulandi par chabuk chalati hai..
jinme jine ki bahut hi tammanna baki hai
unko bhi apne sath le jati hai..

ye mrityu ka kaisa rang hai ,main samajh nahi paya…???
mout se meri jang jari hai,jindagi mujhe bahut pyari hai..

Regards

]]> By: Prem Piyush http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-13 Prem Piyush Wed, 02 Apr 2008 17:35:00 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-13 Mrityu par itni achi kavita padhkar kahne ka man karta tha ki "Jaldi m** Jao".. Par kabhi nahi kah sakta. Kahunga ki Iswar tumhe lambi umar de ( such that we can read more such poems :P) Mrityu par itni achi kavita padhkar kahne ka man karta tha ki “Jaldi m** Jao”.. Par kabhi nahi kah sakta. Kahunga ki Iswar tumhe lambi umar de ( such that we can read more such poems :P )

]]> By: Jitender Singh http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-12 Jitender Singh Wed, 02 Apr 2008 13:43:14 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-12 simply a gr8, deep, and very meaningful poem ....in fact an intelligent work. Keep it up. regds Jitender Singh simply a gr8, deep, and very meaningful poem ….in fact an intelligent work.
Keep it up.

regds

Jitender Singh

]]> By: satyadarshi kunal http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-11 satyadarshi kunal Wed, 02 Apr 2008 13:35:17 +0000 http://visarpi.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/jeevan-mrityu/#comment-11 nice composition.. in reply- Mritu se jo ghabrata hai, wo jeeteji mar jata hai mrityu toh ek atal satya hai, jeevan hai ek dharm, mrityu k aalingan ko thukrana hai ek bhram. mrityu k mukur me jeevan ko tum dekho, markar jeena kisey kehte hain, sambhav ho toh seekho. Mrityu se jo ghabrata hai, wo jeeteji mar jata hai. i wish i could see some more creations of urs nice composition..
in reply- Mritu se jo ghabrata hai, wo jeeteji mar jata hai
mrityu toh ek atal satya hai, jeevan hai ek dharm,
mrityu k aalingan ko thukrana hai ek bhram.
mrityu k mukur me jeevan ko tum dekho,
markar jeena kisey kehte hain, sambhav ho toh seekho.
Mrityu se jo ghabrata hai, wo jeeteji mar jata hai.
i wish i could see some more creations of urs

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